Ok, beyond the preloader issue. Creating a site for an Advertising company,
I think you should really focus on minimizing some of the content you are
showing. Your work should be able to speak for itself in a sense, and it
looks a bit cluttered. Try to space some of this content out onto other
pages, rather than cluttering up your homepage with it all. Ultimately,
people will want to see your work, so make sure your navigation is #1, and
take the priority off of some of the other bells and whistles. To me, it
looks as if everything on the page wants to be the main focus, ( copy on the
left on a lighter background, a spinning star in the bkg, your navigation,
and the thumbnails on the bottom of the screen. Be more subtle! One man's
opinion ;)
Nate
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> I have just uploaded the home page for my new company web site:
>
>
www.DavisAdvertisingInc.com >
> I also uploaded the other basic pages as jpeg's at:
>
>
http://davisadvertisinginc.com/images/ >
> For now, it only shows a simple animation. and there will be more later,
as
> well as other pages. I just wanted to get some feedback on the basic
design,
> etc. I will be asking for more feedback as the project progresses.
>
> I plan on having the type and logo "animate in" and the thumbnails will
scroll
> left/right upon mouseover and when thumbnails are clicked they will open
in a
> larger window with short description....some of which will play quictimes
when
> clicked. I have no idea how to do this and I may hire a freelancer to do
some
> of this...
>
> I'm a "rank amateur" Flash user, so I would appreciate any comments,
> suggestions, etc.
>