macromedia flash sitedesign: Please you could comment on my new site please.

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Thanks for your time,
Regards,

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Why so small, Viru? I'm using a 21" monitor with a screen resolution set
to 1280 x 1024. Your graphics, though nicely done, look lost and lonely. :-(


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hEY vIRU~ I looked at your site when I was reading up about alexis neel's
sight. I too, am 19, so it is great to know I am not alone out here. I have
been working on creating a site for my boss, and it is going slower than ever.
well, it could be that I'm new to all of this.
Anyhoo, the opening page it pretty interesting with those blue flames, I just
hate the yahoo geo cities ad up in the right corner-but I guess you have to
have that.
Going into the site I like the bright colors, just not the girl in the bottom
of each button option(guys might like that, but not me.)-maybe continue with
the blue flames instead.
So what is this site about? you...and your skills, if you have designed more
pages I would like to have the option to visit them from the gallery.
Ohh, and the menu button I was not able to click on.
other than that- a lot better than I can do.

P.S. If you are this "boy wonder" to Flash .haha I could use your help of how
to do the banner as seen on www.ascycles.com-that says, "It's All About the
Ride" becasue I would like to do one similar on my site, but how do they
constantly keep it moving like that?
thanks,
Nicole

Hi Viru,
Overall I like the site. The top "menu" button looks like you should be able
to click it. Consider doing something else, it is not really necessary, as
people will know this is the menu, maybe just get rid of it. It has no
function. Also, the scroll bars to the right really should have the middle
piece. I think it is annoying to not. I wasn't even sure they were scroll bars.
I like the colors and little ladies at the bottoms of the screens. Why is the
whole thing so small. The average user's window is 800x600 px.
On your intro page, it doesn't seem to have the same theme as the rest of the
site. Carry the women over to this, or carry the flames into the rest of the
site, to make your theme consistant. Also, the welcome page is nice, but like I
said, people are going to know to use the navigation, there is really no need
for instruction. Use this space instead to introduce yourself or state your
goal of the site.
Hope this helps!
luna

Hey guys, thanks for your comments.

TSQRandy: Yup i dont like the banner, but i dont wanna risk blocking it and
getting banned. The splash page is a left over from a site i kinda stopped
making - got lazy and reused it, but i'll have to change it soon. The girls are
kinda of a personal touch, its a personal site afterall so i guess i'm forgiven
for having them?I'll add a links section tomorrow probably so you can have a
look at my other older sites. Thanks for that. As for the banner, its a
movieclip thats looped so it plays continuously, the first and last frames
would be either one off or the same to allow for a smooth transition. There
appear to be two background images that are tweened from side to side with
varying opacity. I could make a similar banner for you if you like, or you
could try and do it yourself first, upto you?

ladyluna: thanks for taking the time to comment. i've removed the menu button
alltogether. Yup i will be changing the splash page, i got lazy an reused an
old splash page. I'll be carrying on the lady theme :) Changed the Welcome bit
too, i'll probably make it into a dynamic txtbox and link to somewhere so it
changes everyday, yeah i think i'll do that, once again thanks.

Linda Rathgeber: Thank you also for commenting. 21", i'm jealous i want one,
actually i want several hehe. with res at 1024x768 i think it looks alright, i
knew i'd be having issues with different res views with this site but since i'm
not making money off it i guess i can afford to brush it under the carpet.
Thanks for the compliement about the graphics!

ya good site ...

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