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aqeelsfolio
5/14/2004 11:01:27 AM
Peter Blumenthal
5/14/2004 3:28:22 PM
'City and Urban' and 'Sunny ceramics' links are both busted. It would be
good to see more work than 3 intros that don't lead to sites with any
content. The work in Games and Experiments could be more original - they
look like fla's that have been doing the rounds for years now on boards such
as flashkit, with a bit of graphical work done to them.

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jameslyon
5/14/2004 8:19:41 PM
Brit
5/15/2004 4:03:52 AM
I really like you spinning deal on the left site. You might want to work on
the menu a little, maybe another font or image behind the font too, or maybe
when you scroll over it you get more info. Also some of your pieces look
unfinished, such as the experiments and the games. The matching is good,
but I think there is too much empty space. You CD-ROM presentations are
pretty good too.



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