macromedia flash sitedesign: I posted this on 12/23 to the Flash forum but it may have been the wrong
place - no reply's. I'm not trying to cross post, just get an opinion
besides my own.

Thanks

Herman

I finally created my first Flash Screen presentation. I am new to Flash
so would appreciate any feedback offered. Either on content or technical
side.

Goto http://www.wadler.org/Biking/BikeAddons.html and select "Intro to
bike gears - flash"
or
http://www.wadler.org/Biking/Bike_Classes/FlashGears/Gears_content.html

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Well, it's a typical Powerpoint clone presentation. I'd add some
background audio. I like the colour scheme.

On page 1 there seems to be something weird happening with the "Bike
Gears" copy. Did you intend it to animate, ('cause it isn't, [it's just
flickering] in my browser; Firefox 1.5) ?

I didn't go all the way through to the end as its quite long, but I
noticed that some of the pages are a bit too heavy in text. I personally
think that some of it could be spread over two or more slides, in order
to keep them all consistent. That way the text could look pretty with
the "inline" images.

Just my opinions(s) FWIW.

Thanks,

Yes it is supposed to be a PPT clone. I'm moving from PPT to Flash. Next
step will be to add audio and then I may cut back on some of the text.

You're seeing something I'm not. 1st page is an animated bike - nothing
to do with gears just experimenting. Works for me in IE, Netscape, and
Firefox 1.5. Can someone else let me know if they have the same problem?

Herman

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