[quoted text, click to view] "a30n" <webforumsuser@macromedia.com> wrote in message news:dv7eoi$o3r$1@forums.macromedia.com... > Hi all, > > I just finished working on a pretty interesting dental website. I > created > quite (to me) interesting structure, nothing special but > interesting. Anyway, I > just needed to share it with you all and perhaps get some opinions > on what I > can edit and make better, what is good about it and what not. > > Here it is www.ilkova.com > Please post our comments. I would really appreciate it. Your opinion > is much > respected. > > Thanks, > > a30n That's a unique concept! The thing I would do to improve it is to make the background more interesting. Even just a highly faded background image of a dental office or something. The big expanse of plain gray background just doesn't look good to me. Kinda like a nice painting.. it needs a nice wall to hang it on. I like the unusual site design though. tralfaz
Hi all, I just finished working on a pretty interesting dental website. I created quite (to me) interesting structure, nothing special but interesting. Anyway, I just needed to share it with you all and perhaps get some opinions on what I can edit and make better, what is good about it and what not. Here it is www.ilkova.com Please post our comments. I would really appreciate it. Your opinion is much respected. Thanks, a30n
I agree with Newsgroup User, the background is not interesting enough, and too small... but it's a good idea. try to make the tooth slighlty bigger so that the textbox inside it fits at ease. The following is not the best example, but if you go to http://www.johnnyhollow.com/, you can see how they managed to blend the background with the flash by using text. i suggest you reformat it similarily.
Maybe make the tooth bigger or other dental accessories... The fact that the tooth holds all the data and the links to other pages makes the whole site in this little space I would try to make it bigger. It should have the whole attention of the reader and the grey background is at the moment, the whole focus. Good Luck...and good work tho' T.
Yeah, I was concerned with the plain grey background too. I will consider your idea. Thanks tralfaz.
Thanks guys, I will consider the ideas shortly.
Thanks Tiemen Rapati, About the straight-forwardness, it is because there is not much to say about it, and you know, I considered the audience and decided to keep it simple. This way it would be easier for the visitors to undersdand the content. Moreover, the size is definately problematic. I am not going to go with the content out of the tooth because this will ruin my major idea of the design, but I was thinking of actually expanding the shape. This way, I will be able to fit more info. And yes, I don't use all the space, but I don't have that much of info to include anyway. Thanks for the points, a30n
Hey, I hope I'm not sounding too harsh, but I can't really see the * interesting part* of the site? It seems really straightforward to me, and I'm not really convinced this layout you have chosen is the best. As said above, you don't use your space effectively. What about turning the tooth in the navigation element and getting the content window out of the tooth? That way you can deliver much more content, while keeping an alternative looking interface. See through this criticism, you're on the right track. Keep up the good work!
I got one more question though. In http://www.ilkova.com/ I use the ScrollPane Component to have my text with scroll bars, so I was just wandering if there was a way for me to remove the border lines of the component and see only the scroll bar. I tried to find a solution but haven't come across any yet. Could any of you help me out. Thanks, a30n
Im sorry but I would advise anyone not to use those UI components because i be hearing that they are bugged so what about you givea try on building your own.. I mean for the creativity..the pide(lol).. as for what you said about the clearing anything I would say that the one thing i can think about it to strip your UI...you would go on your program file...and navigate until you get to you conponent and ..so on..Hope you understand what i mean... and other thing i know that there is a function is flash about IgnoreWhite..but im not really familiar with it though but i am sure that it is for components though... Hope that I helped... -Ronnie!
Thanks Ronnie, I know what you mean by saying that the components are bugged, although I think they are just too sensitive, you know what I mean. You change something minor, and it doesn't work the way it's supposed to. Anyway, creating your own is definitely a great option, but I found that eventually, it becomes really heavy, and by this I mean like extra 50 k to my swf. I know I can make it smaller, but do not want to invest a lot of time on this right now. Thanks, a30n
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